Callum Hilditch of Class 5 has been doing some lovely descriptive writing based on the Magic Door:
I opened the magic door (it creaked) and I saw LEGOLAND, massive rides, food shops, Lego people and huge animals stomping along. I opened the magic door (it creaked again) and saw everyone with their families, I was too. I opened the magic door and saw Emit and Wildstyle running down the street, they were having a good time, I thought they were happy. I opened the magic door and saw people eating clouds because the clouds are Candyfloss. I opened the magic door and saw Titanic sinking, people jumping off the boat, it looked scary so I quietly shut the door . I opened the magic door and saw they need help so I ran in to the RNLI and said “HELP!” the Titanic is sinking, they did and everyone was rescued and we all went on the rides together. I opened the magic door and saw everybody having a good time and I felt good after helping people, I felt like a hero!
I opened the magic door (it creaked) and I saw LEGOLAND, massive rides, food shops, Lego people and huge animals stomping along. I opened the magic door (it creaked again) and saw everyone with their families, I was too. I opened the magic door and saw Emit and Wildstyle running down the street, they were having a good time, I thought they were happy. I opened the magic door and saw people eating clouds because the clouds are Candyfloss. I opened the magic door and saw Titanic sinking, people jumping off the boat, it looked scary so I quietly shut the door . I opened the magic door and saw they need help so I ran in to the RNLI and said “HELP!” the Titanic is sinking, they did and everyone was rescued and we all went on the rides together. I opened the magic door and saw everybody having a good time and I felt good after helping people, I felt like a hero!
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